11月10日作文

11月10日作文

1, Success has a tight connection with opportunities. There is no denying that opportunity is the key to success.

Actually, there are many potential opportunities in our daily lives and most of us usually miss them, which means missing success. On the other hand, faced two or more opportunities we may hesitate, which makes us lose the opportunities and success in the hand.(赵书言)

2.,,,and success is yours for the taking.(蔡维)

3．The world is filled with diverse successful people. They are successful in different fields, but they take possession of similar qualities. All of them have a positive attitude towards their opportunities and difficulties facing them. They take advantage of the chances and set a goal. Then they spare no effort to realize the goal. So no wonder that they succeed.(管益)

4. However, opportunities are not always good for a person. If a person just wait for opportunities doing nothing, it will be very likely that he will end up achieving nothing, in which case, opportunities have bad effect on us.（陆冯佳）

5. However , how do people expect to succeed when they haven’t been well prepared for holding success?

6. The secret of success in life is for a man to be ready for his opportunity when it comes.(徐娴，俆斐菲)

7. In my view, all of us need to be ready for opportunities. Don’t be afraid of the difficulties we may meet with and learn more knowledge to improve ourselves.( 俆斐菲)

8. Though opportunities bring us a lot of benefits, we can’t ignore their bad impacts.(陈佳乐)

9. Successful people attach importance to finding opportunities properly as they all know that the opportunity to succeed lies in their own hands which just depend on how they treat opportunities correctly.(何亚奇)

10. Many things have advantages and disadvantages.

Sometimes so many choices are in front of us that we begin to hesitate, not knowing which to choose.(袁丽丽)

1. 时态问题：

Some people were proud of the success that depended on the fortunate and opportunities, so that they enjoyed the success without work harder than before.

2. 句子结构问题

While many people aren’t particularly cautious about each opportunity costing them the chance of obtain the success.

Opportunities are important for everyone. People who wants to be successed.

Only if you have enough knowledge and make great preparations can be likely to succeed.

Someone who wants to be successful, he or she must find opportunities.

There are many successful persons think that opportunities are really important for us to receive success.

3. 词汇运用错误;

Only when we catch opportunities, and try our best to improve it, we can get success.

4. 人称数的一致问题：

Opportunities is always wait for the people who has prepared well.

A success always equips himself with knowledge, waiting for the opportunities. Meanwhile , if they should seize the opportunities, they would not give up easily.