英语作文 第一天来学校时的感受

学号 I remember the day when I came to this university. It was a sunny day. I was very exciting. It seems that everyone smiled to me, and everything was okay that day. With the help of an ardent sister, I finished all the procedure quickly. Then I talked with her and asked her some childish questions. Soon she was busy to do other things. I didn’t remember her name but her long beautiful hair. I was sitting on the bench in the square, and I began to write down the wish in my mind which I wanted to achieve during my university. It included reading 100 books, walking to every interesting places in Tianjin with my friends, being a happy girl and bring happiness to my friends… Now I am a sophomore. Sometimes I ask myself: Do all my wishes come true?

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